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  • Writer: ANGEL JIMENEZ
    ANGEL JIMENEZ
  • Jan 27, 2022
  • 3 min read

Updated: May 6, 2022

Critique classmates projects 4.26.22

does it have effort creativity skill and time management?

A: NC

AA:C its creative and has some effort

P: C i think it had some effort and was a bit creative

C: NC

CC: C i think it had no effort its just what i think is a hanging lightbulb and the background flashing

E: NC

G: NC

GG: NC

GGG: NC

J: C this is me i think its simple

M: NC

N: NC

NN: C i think Skateboard

R: NC

S: CC Very skilled and creative and definetly had a lot of effort

SS: C its quick but good

T: NC

TT: C quick but okay

VV: NC

JV: NC


its an okay video


It was a good video that had a little humor and good lines


The song was creative and had good chords and lyrics


the music video was okay but it didnt follow requirements


the story they made and the clip order was put in the best way i would see it.


5.6.22

EXT - ABANDONED ASYLUM - MIDNIGHT

A van is parked outside an abandoned asylum, inside the van is a bunch of equipment and four people... Michael, Olivia, Andre, and Naomi.


At the van...

MICHAEL

I think im in the wrong job. 💀


















Critique classmates animation videos

Ripley:i think it was a good video but i give it a 90 because it was a bit short barely reaching the 30 second mark.

Sheldon:I give it an 80 because it didnt have a good title and it was a bit random


Soto: i give it a 95 because it was very creative but one of the fight had swords that came out of nowhere


Abnor: i give it a 70 because its a bit random or confusing


Sanchez:i give it an 80 because it was a bit off woth sound effects and was less ceative










Critique old how to videos among other things


Drums: i learned a bit but the video had some audio probelms and it had a bit of humor. I rate it 3 stars,

The artist: The tutorial was to fast and short but it still teaches you. i rate it 4 stars.

Signs: it was a little quick when he was showing the signs but it was a good video although the musc was annoying. i rate it 3.5 stars.

Horse: The video taught me how to put a sadle on a horse and it was pretty good but the audio could be better. i rate it 4 stars.

Pinata:It had an amazing twist and had humor. i rate it 4 stars.



















1st year. Principles

2nd year. av or animation or fahion design

3rd year. av2 or animation 2 or fashion design 2

4th year. av3 or video game design or fashion design 3





Showtime critique before the break

Mondragon:I rate them 4 stars. They have good animatons and they put effort.


Zamores:i rate them 5 stars. they put a lot of effort and were creative.


Rodriguez:i rate them 3.5 stars. They put efffort but some were pretty bland.


Morhman:i ate it 4 stars. They were creative and put effort and they were all unique and weird.


Lara: i rate them 2.5 stars. They ddnt put much effort.


Sheldon:i rate them 4 stars. they put a lot of effort and were creative.


Contreras:i rate them 3 stars. they put a bit of effort and were a bit creative.


1st - Sheldon

2nd - Zamores

3rd - Mondragon


Ninja: i rate it 2 stars. it is very awkward and silent.

















1.27.22

INT MR ACOSTAS CLASSROOM AFTERNOON

Joey smiles at Lucresia

LUCRESIA

What are you looking at?

JOEY

You have a beatiful smile, your teeth are great

LUCRESIA

ah thank you, your smile is nice too, wanna go out?


I am a rich guy, i have a yacht in the bahamas and a private jet in italy, i got out every weekend to


1.31.22


INT PIZZERIA AFTERNOON

A suspicious guy named William is wearing a bear costume as he lures kids omewhere

WILLIAM

...

CHILDREN

Freddy!


 
 
 

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